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Tears

Tears
Tears
Trough all that I am
They’ve ripped me apart
And I lay in pieces
Strewn about in my mind
The
Tear
Starts small
Until you play with it
And then it gets bigger
And bigger
And bigger
Until it is then
Dismantled
The
Tear
Is huge
Quite bigger than ever
And this
Tear
Is in my mind
My mind
Is in two
Completely confused
On what I would do
Because I know nothing
And this
Torn
Mind
Has contributed
To my
Torn
Heart
I am
Torn
In every piece
My pieces
Are everywhere
And now I cannot
Find them
Any of them
Especially
My Heart
I can’t Heal
My
Tears
©2008-2009 ~shakiraepa71
:iconshakiraepa71:

Author's Comments

It's tears like rips. Not like crying.

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:iconm00n-fang:
Thats so good! All your poetry is so moving! You can tell it comes from the heart.

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Who do you think would win in a fight- Muppets or Sesame Street?
:iconshakiraepa71:
Thank you again. It is all directly from my heart. My poetry is my Depression "Outlet"....
:icondouchi:
This poem is just so...unique.
This sounds like something alot of people probablly say when they read poetry but, It's prety much exactlly how I feel whenever, I'm turlly upset about soemthing.
But Then again I guess when you write excellent poetry people relate to it huh?
Great Poem :]

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